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#Actualkuramayoko10

Posted 18 November 2012 - 07:13 PM

Now, on the grammar errors.
I found a common error on your text: confusion between possessive pronouns and verb to be.

The correct writing is the following












Verb ToBe versus Possessive Pronouns
SubjectTo BePossessive Pronoun
Iam = I'ammine
Youare = you'reyour
Heis = he'shis
Sheis = she'sher
Itis = it'sits
Weare = we'reour
Youare = you'reyour
Theythey = they'retheir


For example, lets correct the following sentence in your text:
"... the huling shadow appeared in the broad streets taking theyre bullets"
Correct form would be
"... the hulling shadow appeared in the broad streets taking their bullets"

You had a few typos as well, you only need a second read and revision. Nothing really bad.

#3kuramayoko10

Posted 18 November 2012 - 07:10 PM

Now, on the grammar errors.
I found a common error on your text: confusion between possessive pronouns and verb to be.

The correct writing is the following











Subject ToBe PossessivePronoun
Iam = I'ammine
Youare = you'reyour
Heis = he'shis
Sheis = she'sher
Itis = it'sits
Weare = we'reour
Youare = you'reyour
Theythey = they'retheir


For example, lets correct the following sentence in your text:
"... the huling shadow appeared in the broad streets taking theyre bullets"
Correct form would be
"... the hulling shadow appeared in the broad streets taking their bullets"

You had a few typos as well, you only need a second read and revision. Nothing really bad.

#2kuramayoko10

Posted 18 November 2012 - 07:09 PM

Now, on the grammar errors.
I found a common error on your text: confusion between possessive pronouns and verb to be.

The correct writing is the following











Subject ToBe PossessivePronoun
Iam = I'ammine
Youare = you'reyour
Heis = he'shis
Sheis = she'sher
Itis = it'sits
Weare = we'reour
Youare = you'reyour
Theythey = they'retheir


For example, lets correct the following sentence in your text:
"... the huling shadow appeared in the broad streets taking theyre bullets"
Correct form would be
"... the hulling shadow appeared in the broad streets taking their bullets"

You had a few typos as well, you only need a second read and revision. Nothing really bad.

#1kuramayoko10

Posted 18 November 2012 - 06:17 PM

Now, on the grammar errors.
I found a common error on your text: confusion between possessive pronouns and verb to be.

The correct writing is the following

Subject To Be Possessive Pronoun
I am = I'm mine
You are = you're your
He is = he'is his
She is = she'is her
It is = it's its
We are = we're our
You are = you're your
They are = they're their

For example, lets correct the following sentence in your text:
"... the huling shadow appeared in the broad streets taking theyre bullets"
Correct form would be
"... the hulling shadow appeared in the broad streets taking their bullets"

You had a few typos as well, you only need a second read and revision. Nothing really bad.

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