Not bad, why is the sword glowing? is it a glow to show that the sword is giving off light? if so than the shading on the breast, fingers, neck, and chin are off. Honestly it feels out of place with the rest of the picture. The skin and other features seem correct. Overall I get a demonic feel for this but it is lacking some polish. I think the major issue is your lack of light tones. You have a good mid setup but without any highlights of note or some lighting focusing on the key parts you get lost in the dullness of it.
I say this is a good next attempt but you should focus on the lighting since your form is more or less okay.