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#ActualShadowFlar3

Posted 16 September 2013 - 07:26 AM

I think it's slow paced and a bit repetitive in theme/mood. Might work in a longer story but doesn't give much as it is now. Because of the narrow scope in this short text it is also hard to try to get game ideas about it. Is the conflict in the story about getting out of the well, the figure or the nightmare itself?

 

Keep on writing smile.png


#1ShadowFlar3

Posted 16 September 2013 - 07:26 AM

I think it's slow paced and a bit repetitive in theme. Might work in a longer story but doesn't give much as it is now. Because of the narrow scope in this short text it is also hard to try to get game ideas about it. Is the conflict in the story about getting out of the well, the figure or the nightmare itself?

 

Keep on writing :)


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