I started with my normal review style of viewing the entire web site from a potential employer standpoint. I started doing that, but then realized in your case there was absolutely nothing about your web site that says "Hire me". Normally there are a few good things that are gems: completed games, excellent projects, transferable skills. But in this case I have gone through the entire site and found nothing compelling.
When I look objectively at your web site, this is what I found:
- A home page, devoted to a single poorly-written sentence.
- "About", which is two sentences long.
- A CV page that makes me want to cry for your life story.
- A Flash game project --- which would have been a logical place to include the actual game --- where you have three screenshots plus a fourth duplicate screen shot.
- A "Game Pitch" for a Buffy clone, but is actually four sentences and a link to a PowerPoint presentation. Opening the presentation reveals 7 pages of fluff that you could have pulled from a few minutes on Google, and a single page "Game Proposal" that includes spelling errors and is rather lacking on details.
- Three documents that were first-year homework assignments. Most look like they were the form "Here is your assignment, hand it in tomorrow morning."
- And your ENTIRE Year 2 Work, which is a story flowchart consisting of four branches.
I could find nothing good about the site.
I tried to find something good about it. I tried hard. I spent nearly two hours going through it, writing and re-writing this post, then deleting it and starting over. The content needs to be completely scrapped and replaced with actual content, preferably content that will help you get a job.
The only things I feel after carefully reading your entire site many times are a mixture of empathy, sadness, and pity.
So trying to be constructive, let's see where we can go from here.
Please read all the documents linked to in the forum's FAQ. Most of the information applies to you. Also, please read all the links under Tom Sloper's web site "Sloperama", as again nearly all of the pages apply to your career choice.
You chose to go to a game design program. That program is not BCS accredited. Whatever your reasons for selecting the school were, you have completed the program and that is where you are now.
It appears you are looking for a job as a game designer. Game designer is not an entry level position. You won't get an entry level job as a game designer. It is possible to get a job as a level designer, but the odds of actually finding an opening are small and the odds of your current CV being the best of the lot is abysmal. You will not break in to the industry as a game designer unless there is some incredible detail that was left out of your information.
After reading the links in the forum FAQ, you need to pick a job that is entry level. Make that your goal.
What job do you want to get? Of the jobs that are a reliable breaking in path, I recommend QA. Jobs are relatively plentiful.
Thanks for the constructive feedback and the useful links. I read FAQs about the Games Designer role a few years ago on Sloperama. I read that Game Design isn't a entry level role, so after graduation, I've been mainly applying for QA Testing jobs. I read the FAQs about QA Tester and how you should be close to a developer or publisher to apply for a QA tester position. They are plenty of studios in London. London is a good location for gaming. I applied to Sega Europe. They had a few QA Testing positions. The location is a bit far maybe that's why they haven't taken me for a Interview. Headstrong games, is 20-25 minutes by bus from me and slightly mad studios which isn't too far. You say QA jobs are relatively plentiful, but it doesn't seem to be the case when I look at gamedev.map and look at the list of companies in London and the South East. Mostly it is for other positions some of the QA tester roles look for experience. Some of the companies in America I've seen post a lot of QA jobs. With other entry level jobs, I read in the FAQs that level design is one. But it is normally a mid level role on the job posts. I had a intern interview at marmalade for a support role internship two months ago. Customer support is another entry level job. I've applied for a few admin jobs within some game companies. Along with getting real work experience, I've applied for admin jobs and retail assistant jobs. I've had a few interviews recently with retail companies, Toys r us, Game.