2. "The Chosen One" is something the industry itself laughs at.
Sure about that? its the standard cookie cutter in all sort of games from TES Skyrim (you are the last Dragonborn) to Crysis ("YOU are the weapon!"). Kingdoms of Amalur comes to mind too (you're the only one that isn't bound by fate). And these are recent and very, very successful games.
I think you're misrepresenting that you laugh at it as something "the industry itself" laughs at, which it isn't the case.
As for your story Shane, imma going to say it, not my coup of tea precisely.