Going to post your story? Read this first
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Posted 10 August 2004 - 01:46 AM
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Posted 10 August 2004 - 06:13 AM
2. Think about one section of your story you are wanting feedback on in particular, and just focus on that part for now.
Many people will post huge 50 page posts that no one will have time to read. Don’t just copy and paste your entire ‘My_Story.doc’ file. You will get a much better response if you space it out over a few posts which are a few days apart. Also, try to make sure that you are being specific on what section of the game you want advice on, and you will be much better off. For example, if you had an idea for an amazing RPG story, put the characters in one post, then the setting in another (a few days later), then the start of story in another. Think of it this way, if it wasn’t your post, would you read through the entire thing?
Spliting a story apeart might be a horrible idea in some cases as the information needed in order to respond to what the topic would be spread out. For example the player might have to obtain a specific weapon to defeat their foe. They are also the only one that can use this weapon. The question the orginal poster might be asking is for what reason should the player be the only one to be able to use the weapon. The information needed to respond to that question might include
Setting -gives limits on what is possible. An advanced civilizatoin might not have magic, and having a charater having a specific gene would make no sence in Medevil Europe.
The Character itself- Does the character have a third arm, or other unusality. What was his past like.
The story- How did they aquire the weapon, do they need anything else to use the weapon.
In other words what I'm saying is the poster needs to give all the information nessecery, but without giving extra information ot being to detailed. Brief summeries can give a good enough idea to be able to respond to something, and if asked they can always explain further.
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Posted 10 August 2004 - 08:29 AM
I'd also like to highlight a couple other rules of thumb before posting...
As far as I can tell from reading about online game projects, and from seeing actual online games, I feel that story is kept to a minimal. Not to blast anyone that is coming out with a BMMORPGSTWCTW Breakthrough Massive Multiplayer Online Role Playing Game Story That Will Change The World but I've never seen it done. As far as that genre goes, I don't even think it needs to be done.
Dragons and Dwarves
If you are posting a game scenario that could generally be described as a sterotypical RPG i.e. medieval europe with dragons and magic and swords, bear in mind that you probably won't receive the most quality of feedback. If it's something that's been done before, it would be common courtesy to let us know ahead of time.
On the other hand beware trying to break from the stereotype by just adding some sort of gimmick. For example, robot dragons and bazookas might separate your RPG from the average run of the mill ones, but comes off so shoddy that it sacrifices anything your game would have had as far as story anyways.
Dragon Ball Z and Mickey Mouse
Bear in mind that if your story surrounds characters, settings, or stories from pre-made universes (from say final fantasy or dbz) you willingly suffer the wrath from anyone that doesn't like those tv shows or games. Your idea will be most respected when it is clearly your idea and yours alone.
Well, that said, I hope you will all benefit from reading this. best of luck and happy programming,
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Posted 10 August 2004 - 09:35 PM
Also since I have created new projects etc etc etc wada wada wada I will wait for the right moment on how to word my post and keep reading from other people's post and learn more then just throwing out another ridiculous post and get flamed from it.
Patience is all I need to start getting a team going until Ihave read all of my answers on the forum first and then start writing a new post or reply or what have ya.
Thanks once again for the tips.
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Posted 11 August 2004 - 02:41 AM
Original post by gamegod3001
Spliting a story apart might be a horrible idea in some cases as the information needed in order to respond to what the topic would be spread out... (snip)
mmm, you do have a point. I have reworded the guide a bit. Let me know if you think its better or worse.
Original post by Chokki
...Ideas for guide....
Thanks Chokki. They are some good points. Ive updated the guide with pointers which touch on what you said, but I have made sure that it dosnt interfere with your post, so you still get credit for your ideas.
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Posted 11 August 2004 - 03:27 PM
I'll add some of my own observations -
Posters are more likely to respond to 'survey', 'what's your favorite?', and 'how would you do it?' types of posts, especially if they are gramatically correct and relatively short. You will get a lot better responses to two short posts than one long post. (My roommate teases me that I must hold the record for the longest post on gamedev. ;) )
It's a good idea to explain any technical terms you are using because the population of this forum is very mixed, some posters are still in high school while others are post university and a few have even been published.
Don't just post a story - explain to us why you wrote that particular story, what you want it to accomplish, what specific aspects of it you want help with, and what type of feedback would help you.
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Posted 22 April 2006 - 11:47 AM
Original post by sunandshadow
Posters are more likely to respond to 'survey', 'what's your favorite?', and 'how would you do it?' types of posts, especially if they are gramatically correct and relatively short.
Be aware, though, that the feedback might not actually be valuable, or may you a better writer/improve your story. The problem with the survey mentality is that it suggests a lack of focus on your part - a lack of a definite story objective and passion for your created world. It's like the team that asks "What is your favorite game genre?" in order to decide what it will make - that game is virtually guaranteed to be a disaster.
In short, narrow the focus of your survey. Give the respondents options within a limited range such that the feedback is meaningful and enhances your objective of writing a quality story.
/me returns to lurking.
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Posted 19 May 2009 - 01:41 PM
Original post by Glass2099
What can I do to improve this thread and post (http://www.gamedev.net/community/forums/topic.asp?topic_id=535363)? Comments on my game idea would be appreciated without pier! Thanks!
Using more paragraphs would certainly help. I'm on a large monitor and it looks like a wall of text to me so I can't imagine how intimated others on smaller resolutions might look. For a post that long, the first reaction for most people is going to be 'yawn, another thread of plain text'. You can take some time to add in some colors, fonts, better separation, maybe some graphics, don't overdo it but it's hard for anyone to simply read thread after thread of text with no visual stimulus.
The next suggestion I would have for you is to have your sales pitch paragraph at the top where someone can read it, get the gist of your entire idea, and decide if they really want to read it all or not. Readers who are faced with the option of read the entire thread or not might likely go with the latter as the threads are a dime a dozen around here.
Furthermore, you need to be more specific about what you are really after. Your thread title suggests people to reply to what type of game you would like to make, but the thread contents are about your ideas. The two ideas are quite a bit disjoint and you need to rename your thread to be more relevant to focusing on your ideas. I don't think you bothered to write all that simply to post your ideas and not get feedback on it.
So let me say that again, what you write in your post does not seem in line with your intentions, there is too much going on and you need to focus on one or the other. I read all that and my first reaction is "Ok, and?" since there is no cohesive direction your post takes.
That's just my take on the post, good luck with your ideas! [smile]
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Posted 25 June 2012 - 12:43 PM
The Game Design forum is the right place to post a design for a game. This Writing forum is for game stories. You are welcome to post your scenario in the Game Design Forum if you want suggestions on the design, or here in the Writing forum if you want suggestions on the story. But don't try to email or PM your idea to individual forum members unless they say it is ok.
İ want to send my scenario about car games. İ want to send some of developers in this site. İ wondering his/her ideas about my scenario. İs this possible?
Phone game idea available free to someone who will develop it (Alphadoku game - the only existing phone game of this type is both for windows phone only and awful. PM for details.)
I want to help design a "sandpark" MMO. Optional interactive story with quests and deeply characterized NPCs, plus sandbox elements like player-craftable housing and lots of other crafting. If you are starting a design of this type, please PM me. I also love pet-breeding games.