My first ever render,
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Posted 23 December 2011 - 05:38 AM
What application did you ue to make your model?
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Posted 01 January 2012 - 10:15 AM
If I might point to some small issues:
- The corners are a bit sharp, they could use some smoothing.
- The same for the corners of the insets of the touchpad and the screen.
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Posted 01 January 2012 - 11:39 AM
However, it's a pretty good model, especially for it being your first
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Posted 02 January 2012 - 07:27 PM
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Posted 04 January 2012 - 02:50 AM
The keys look a bit flat, probably because they are just a texture and not actually part of the mesh? Your materials and textures could use a bit of tweaking, but I'm guessing your focus is more on the actual model so I'll reserve judgement on that and see what else you come up with.
That is true about the keys. I guess there is a bumpmap function I do not know how to use yet but I will learn so soon.