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Posted 10 January 2012 - 05:41 PM
Latest finished project Project
Posted 18 January 2012 - 12:28 PM
Posted 21 January 2012 - 05:08 PM
Nice job! Your color palette is pretty good, and overall it's pretty readable. That said, I feel like it might be a bit hard on the eyes due to how busy it is, especially the grass segments. Admittedly this might just be your game's art style, but I'd say the mix was a bit harsh.
As an experiment, I poked about with the image and extended the area covered by your midtones a bit. It's far from perfect, but I think it conveys what I'm saying in a sense.
Posted 21 January 2012 - 06:52 PM
It was hardly meant to be a replacement - more like a 30 second demonstration of how one could make it less busy. Ideally the result would be that the TC would come back with his own edit.
no offense but this looks like crap. the original was way better and looked way more professional.
Posted 22 January 2012 - 12:05 PM