Feedback for my artists first images for WorldAlpha
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Posted 17 September 2012 - 07:40 PM
Any feedback positive or negative is appreciated. Thanks.
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Posted 18 September 2012 - 05:02 AM
I'd like to see it in it's final setting though, and not just as separate icons. Might have a certain charm if everything is just slightly wonky.
Either have your artist correct the issues, or exaggerate the wonkiness (that's a technical term) so that it won't be mistaken for laziness or being an amateur.
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Posted 18 September 2012 - 10:56 AM
Depending on how serious you want the game as a whole, but from what I gathered from your site, I'd drop the wonkiness (yep, totally legit term. ) to the car icon and fiddle around with the perspective and color palette of the others.
It isn't too noticeable with the other icons, but it does make it feel just kinda off. Like they aren't real.
I'm not saying go hyper-realistic, but they just don't seem to fit the aesthetic of the other stuff I saw on the site, so it makes a bit of a barrier for the player to slightly chip away at the suspension of disbelief.
Hope it helped.
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