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Posted 14 October 2012 - 08:32 AM
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Posted 14 October 2012 - 04:07 PM
Here are some quick-n-dirty thoughts on your piece:
I like the drum beat with the retro elements mixed in. Very effective!
I liked the change up in textures at times but the piece basically offered one flavor. I'd recommend exploring a contrasting flavor which can freshen things up a bit more. Dwell on that for a while and then return to the original flavor. It will make this song feel a bit more complete. Everything else Rob said, i.e. envelopes, modulation, etc is good advice as well.
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