Logo feedback - Ninja Cat and Zombie Dinosaurs
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Hehe, thanks, it's true crimes, can be downloaded from here http://www.fontsquirrel.com/fonts/True-Crimes and from what I've read, it's completely free, also for commercial purposes.
Actually, it says you have to contact the author's agent: http://www.waltervelezart.com/fonts.html
FontSquirrel is just being lazy about it, and possibly illegally hosting them to begin with.
New Logo looks much nicer though.
FontSquirrel is just being lazy about it, and possibly illegally hosting them to begin with.
New Logo looks much nicer though.
Author
Ups, don't believe what they say on the internets.
Another version, with partly inspired partly custom ninja font:
IMHO looks better still, but perhaps could be better? How? I looked at it so much, I don't see anything objectively anymore. Perhaps change composition, more elements like shuriken/katana, less stuff, lighting, different contrast or brightness, richer texture, do something with the footprints, less flashy efects or on contrary etc.
I'm asking just for completness, other than that I think logo is good enough and moving to other areas.
Another version, with partly inspired partly custom ninja font:
IMHO looks better still, but perhaps could be better? How? I looked at it so much, I don't see anything objectively anymore. Perhaps change composition, more elements like shuriken/katana, less stuff, lighting, different contrast or brightness, richer texture, do something with the footprints, less flashy efects or on contrary etc.
I'm asking just for completness, other than that I think logo is good enough and moving to other areas.
I think that second logo with the more script like "Ninja Cat" is pretty dang good. 
But, maybe the dino foot print is a lil' big. It draws the eye to the right quite a bit because of it's size and the bright green. If you play around with it a little, I'm sure you'll find a perfect balance.
Aside from that, having a raster graphic isn't too bad as long as you make it fairly large, but having a vector version will help with scale-ability when you're marketing your game. (Just so you can scale up without a ton of jaggy edges and pixels.)
All that being said, I think it's looking good! You're on the right track!
But, maybe the dino foot print is a lil' big. It draws the eye to the right quite a bit because of it's size and the bright green. If you play around with it a little, I'm sure you'll find a perfect balance.
Aside from that, having a raster graphic isn't too bad as long as you make it fairly large, but having a vector version will help with scale-ability when you're marketing your game. (Just so you can scale up without a ton of jaggy edges and pixels.)
All that being said, I think it's looking good! You're on the right track!
Ahh... much better.
But I would be careful about the color you choose. Most dominant are the dinos and 'AND' and the cats are just background. Use some more color, here's a little paint over attempt:
But I would be careful about the color you choose. Most dominant are the dinos and 'AND' and the cats are just background. Use some more color, here's a little paint over attempt:
You shoudl make the Ninja Cat part in reddish orange, as it will compliment the color green in the zombie part, and they will make each other pop.
Author
Thanks for the feedback, I scaled down dino foot, added slight blueish tint to cat, made other many small tiny improvements. I played with more colors, nothing come out of that. It's good enough for me, I'm done with it.
Thanks again! You're gonna be in credits
Thanks again! You're gonna be in credits
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