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I think we're splitting hairs here. When I offer critiques on pieces I do so in the form of positive feedback only. In other words I don't just type "I hate this" or "you suck." Just trying to get a feel for your intentions behind this post but offering up a piece for feedback is more than cool.
Nate (AT) MadsenStudios (DOT) Com
Composer-Sound Designer Madsen Studios
Austin, TX USA