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My First Battle Theme


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#1 Tonedeafrob   Members   -  Reputation: 225

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Posted 18 December 2012 - 07:31 PM

Hey,
I'm working on a MOBA game currently, for which I've just written this battle theme (actually it's just part of one really big piece, it's kinda complex). Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! The shouts are "Budo" by the way, which is the name of the game. I will get round to doing them in higher quality at some point I hope!
https://soundcloud.com/roblaidlowmusic/sacred-war-part-1-v1
Thanks!

Edited by Tonedeafrob, 22 December 2012 - 05:19 AM.

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#2 Julian Domanski   Members   -  Reputation: 115

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Posted 19 December 2012 - 01:11 PM

Good stuff, it has a nice flow and builds the tension well. Just what you need for a boss fight! I don't know if this is pre mix or the final master, but I think the toms could do with a little padding out, they sound a bit 'paper baggy', if that makes sense? Other than that I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work!

#3 M4uesviecr   Members   -  Reputation: 419

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Posted 20 December 2012 - 04:18 PM

Nice work with this! The drums especially - They are spot on. I think you do a very good job with the buildup to 50, though I was expecting an atmosphere completely different from what I got. Instead of a massive explosion right afterwards, you kind of hold off. Very interesting.

I think the incorporation of the voices is very good. Possibly one thing I would comment on is the drum that enters in the latter half of the piece. I would possibly tone it down, it seems a bit overbearing (though I love the use of that particular timbre). I also think that you could even build the song further, and keep the intensity growing in further for a bigger reprieve Overall, this will make for a great battle theme!

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#4 Tonedeafrob   Members   -  Reputation: 225

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Posted 23 December 2012 - 07:47 PM

Thanks guys, I'll have another look at some of the tom bits for the final cut <img data-cke-saved-src="http://public.gamedev.net//public/style_emoticons/default/smile.png" src="http://public.gamedev.net//public/style_emoticons/default/smile.png" class="bbc_emoticon" title=":)" />
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