Thanks nsmadsen for your time on a long feedback! yeah I tried to keep it low I never thought its not so much danger. I add some sweetness to it because the main character is a girl, but your opinion stands still, kinda agree with you that I need to make fierce it a little bit more. Anyway glad you enjoyed it!
Can you tell me which part do you feel it needs better volume/velocity control? I really can't get the sense on which part I should. Do you think the cymbal is kinda noisy? or the piano is too low/uncontrolled in the middle? the drum is swallowed?
Yes I got to be honest I only used Fruity Loops like a month so it's not finalized simply because I don't really know what I can do with it much because of my early capability on how to use it (For example, I don't have any automation at all), but it's not really a reason; I have to learn it more.
About the string/cello patch can you tell me exactly at which part? because I don't use strings/cello at all, but I do have a rhythm piano and bass (in the middle) that has a volume delay on it, maybe it makes it sounds like one, but I think I need to make sure. About the ostinato yes I'll highly reconsider that in the piece.
A little off but, If I may, do you have any recommendations on which sound fonts/packs I should get for this matter? I kinda lack of strings/cello sounds and drums (like the bells, tambourine, tom, etc2).
Edited by mychii, 27 December 2012 - 08:03 PM.