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Acoustic Electronic (Work in Progress)


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#1 M4uesviecr   Members   -  Reputation: 419

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Posted 18 January 2013 - 08:49 AM

This is a track that was supposed to be used in a space game. It didn't get used, but I liked it enough to keep. When I submitted it to the developer, it was still a work in progress. I'm steadily getting used to recording acoustic guitar (well, guitar in general), and I would love some feedback on the entire track, since this is the first time I have recorded guitar and combined it in this fashion. I don't think the climax is open enough, and enveloping enough. I want it to have a kind of engulfing feeling before the mellow ending.

 

Thanks a lot for those willing to offer feedback (though I feel like a pig for continuously asking for it).

 

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Edited by M4uesviecr, 18 January 2013 - 08:51 AM.

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#2 Kristoff K.   Members   -  Reputation: 207

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Posted 19 January 2013 - 12:45 PM

I really dig the guitar work! However, in the first half the drums and guitar not always hit in the same moment.

 

The drums are a bit weak in terms of presence. By all mean, don't change them, as those are very good acoustic percussion bits! Just process them more.



#3 neutrient   Members   -  Reputation: 118

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Posted 26 January 2013 - 01:20 PM

Great tune! Feels a bit strange for a space game - although it would absolutely ROCK if that game was some kind of wild west in space setting - with gritty ships and grittier pilots etc!!



#4 Python Blue   Members   -  Reputation: 151

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Posted 26 January 2013 - 10:50 PM

My criticisms were summed up by Kristoff K. Very good start, though!


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#5 M4uesviecr   Members   -  Reputation: 419

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Posted 02 February 2013 - 09:44 AM

Hey guys! Sorry for such a late reply but thanks a ton for the feedback on the piece! I'm currently working on another (one that will be used officially in the game). I may post that up and ask for feedback as well. I seem to be having a difficult time with balancing.


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