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#1 blueshogun96   Crossbones+   -  Reputation: 792

Posted 28 March 2013 - 12:03 AM

One thing I have been considering for my upcoming games is creating trailers.  Tbh, I don't believe I've ever created a very effective trailer (one that I'd show to the public on a massive scale), but I'd like to ensure that I do not make common n00b or indie mistakes.  There are some rules I've already read up on, and other (at least to me) are just downright common sense.

 

What I did:

 

1. Made 3 video captures between 12 and 14 seconds.

2. Made some basic logos (to fit the style of the game).

3. Added some brief descriptions between footage.

4. Added a screen talking about what platforms the game will support as well as a copyright string at the bottom.

5. Used some basic and soothing music that would suit the game's genre and style (at least I tried to).

 

What I didn't/refused to do:

 

1. Make the trailer longer then 90 seconds.

2. Waste time with flashy logos or put much emphasis on them.

3. Add some random heavy metal or techno song (really, anyone who uses "Let the Bodies Hit the Floor" as their trailer music is just asking for failure since people are notoriously tired of hearing it and will likely click the back button).

4. Do some lame commentary in the background.

5. Make an entire video with me just playing the game.

 

What I believe I did wrong:

 

1. The screen at 0:24 saying "Simple but challenging gameplay ... and with progressive difficulty" probably wasn't a good idea since it looks obvious enough.

2. I didn't include a release date at the end.

3. I didn't include a link, or mention my website.

4. The X:Y coordinate debug output isn't very professional to have on a trailer.

5. Probably should fade out the music as it finishes.

 

I'm sure there's more but that's what I've come up with at the moment.  This isn't a trailer that I've made public because I already know it's not ready.  And without further adieu, here it is.

 

 

Feel free to do your absolute worst.  I like putting everything to the ultimate test before falling in love with it only to have my digital heart broken into a million and one pixels later.  To be on the safe side, I assume that my game or my trailer is complete crap and let the masses decide.  You guys have always been realistic and brutally honest (and sometimes downright douchey), but that's the type of critique I need right now.   

 

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#2 Alpha_ProgDes   Crossbones+   -  Reputation: 4678

Posted 28 March 2013 - 12:08 AM

This game looks a lot like golf. What I mean is that it's probably a lot more fun playing it than it is watching trailers of it.


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#3 blueshogun96   Crossbones+   -  Reputation: 792

Posted 28 March 2013 - 12:19 AM

This game looks a lot like golf. What I mean is that it's probably a lot more fun playing it than it is watching trailers of it.

I can agree with this.

 

So, are you also saying that creating a trailer for this game is not necessary or worth it?

 

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#4 Alpha_ProgDes   Crossbones+   -  Reputation: 4678

Posted 28 March 2013 - 12:39 AM

This game looks a lot like golf. What I mean is that it's probably a lot more fun playing it than it is watching trailers of it.

I can agree with this.

 

So, are you also saying that creating a trailer for this game is not necessary or worth it?

 

Shogun.

 

I wouldn't say that. It's nice to see what the game is like. Also, you couldn't do a better job with showing your games with screenshots. I just don't know what to add or change in your trailer to better convey "fun".


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#5 Liffey   Members   -  Reputation: 105

Posted 28 March 2013 - 12:40 AM

The trailer gets the point across, but you could make it nicer by having better designed font slides, right now it's clear you just typed something out in a couple seconds. .  Also the logo looks really choppy.



#6 blueshogun96   Crossbones+   -  Reputation: 792

Posted 28 March 2013 - 01:01 AM

Nicer font slides?  How so?  Actually, I intentionally used that font for this trailer with an all white background and was planning on keeping it that way.  My reason for that is because I wanted the game to have a "Windows Metro" feel to it for all platforms.  If that's not the best of ideas, then I may change that.

 

I know the logo doesn't look too good.  Changing it will happen sooner or later.

 

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#7 Sandman   Moderators   -  Reputation: 2077

Posted 28 March 2013 - 10:04 AM

 My reason for that is because I wanted the game to have a "Windows Metro" feel to it for all platforms.  If that's not the best of ideas, then I may change that.

 

This game looks like it was tailor made for showing off some cool particle effects. Your game looks like it could be fun, but it's not very pretty. The Windows metro feel isn't really coming across all that well.

 

Some might say particle effects are overdone, and that flying squares are innovative and new. Which may be true, but I still think that pretty explodey lights will look much cooler - and will be a lot easier to sell - than small flying squares any day.

 

Your text bits aren't very meaningful, and the language is a bit odd. "Every action affects your gameplay session's outcome". Who says "gameplay session"? Technical game developery people might, but to a Joe Gamer it sounds a bit wordy and weird.



#8 szecs   Members   -  Reputation: 2082

Posted 28 March 2013 - 11:34 AM

I like the game and the looks, effects etc...

However, I don't like that debugging-like coordinates print on the bottom left.

 

The rules are quite simple, maybe I'd add them to the trailer.



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Posted 28 March 2013 - 11:50 AM

 My reason for that is because I wanted the game to have a "Windows Metro" feel to it for all platforms.  If that's not the best of ideas, then I may change that.

 

This game looks like it was tailor made for showing off some cool particle effects. Your game looks like it could be fun, but it's not very pretty. The Windows metro feel isn't really coming across all that well.

 

Some might say particle effects are overdone, and that flying squares are innovative and new. Which may be true, but I still think that pretty explodey lights will look much cooler - and will be a lot easier to sell - than small flying squares any day.

 

Your text bits aren't very meaningful, and the language is a bit odd. "Every action affects your gameplay session's outcome". Who says "gameplay session"? Technical game developery people might, but to a Joe Gamer it sounds a bit wordy and weird.

 

Not very pretty?  Before I answer that, let me ask you this.  Have you ever played the game sinuous?  If so, are you aware of what made it successful, in spite of it's visual simplicity?

 

Honestly, the flashy lights thingy is something I've seen so many times that it really doesn't appeal to me.  I wanted to do/try something different, like what Kenta Cho does does with his games.

 

I can understand the text bits being too wordy or technical, but I thought "gameplay session" would be self explanatory   Is there a different term you'd prefer?  At that moment, I couldn't think of anything else.

 

I like the game and the looks, effects etc...

However, I don't like that debugging-like coordinates print on the bottom left.

 

The rules are quite simple, maybe I'd add them to the trailer.

 

Yeah, I'm not going to include that in my actual trailer.  I forgot to disable that before making the recordings.

 

And instead of the first screen of obvious text, I'll find an interesting way of explaining the rules of the game.

 

Thanks for the replies so far.  I really appreciate it.

 

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#10 BladeOfWraith   Members   -  Reputation: 245

Posted 28 March 2013 - 11:57 AM

This reminds me of Boogaloopers :)

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It was a fun game. One of the only shareware games I ever registered.


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#11 Tournicoti   Prime Members   -  Reputation: 682

Posted 28 March 2013 - 12:16 PM

How bad is it ? Well not bad at all ! laugh.png

Just about the logo, the curved thick line seems too irregular, not polished for me. Antialiasing is missing on it (?)

 

I really like the music at the beginning (0 to 20 seconds), but rythms, flute and lead synth after that seems to me a bit *too much*, concrete.


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#12 blueshogun96   Crossbones+   -  Reputation: 792

Posted 28 March 2013 - 12:51 PM

This reminds me of Boogaloopers smile.png

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It was a fun game. One of the only shareware games I ever registered.

 

When I'm on my Notebook PC, I'm going to try this out. Thanks.

 

How bad is it ? Well not bad at all ! laugh.png

Just about the logo, the curved thick line seems too irregular, not polished for me. Antialiasing is missing on it (?)

 

I really like the music at the beginning (0 to 20 seconds), but rythms, flute and lead synth after that seems to me a bit *too much*, concrete.

 

I created the logo with MS Paint, so you can see why it looks so bad, lol.

 

I also agree with you on the music aspect.  The rythms kinda ruin it and atm, I didn't have any music that didn't eventually have just a simple tune.

 

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#13 Tournicoti   Prime Members   -  Reputation: 682

Posted 28 March 2013 - 12:55 PM

Good luck Shogun rolleyes.gif



#14 dakota.potts   Members   -  Reputation: 455

Posted 29 March 2013 - 03:18 AM

 

 My reason for that is because I wanted the game to have a "Windows Metro" feel to it for all platforms.  If that's not the best of ideas, then I may change that.

 

This game looks like it was tailor made for showing off some cool particle effects. Your game looks like it could be fun, but it's not very pretty. The Windows metro feel isn't really coming across all that well.

 

Some might say particle effects are overdone, and that flying squares are innovative and new. Which may be true, but I still think that pretty explodey lights will look much cooler - and will be a lot easier to sell - than small flying squares any day.

 

Your text bits aren't very meaningful, and the language is a bit odd. "Every action affects your gameplay session's outcome". Who says "gameplay session"? Technical game developery people might, but to a Joe Gamer it sounds a bit wordy and weird.

 

Not very pretty?  Before I answer that, let me ask you this.  Have you ever played the game sinuous?  If so, are you aware of what made it successful, in spite of it's visual simplicity?

 

Honestly, the flashy lights thingy is something I've seen so many times that it really doesn't appeal to me.  I wanted to do/try something different, like what Kenta Cho does does with his games.

 

I can understand the text bits being too wordy or technical, but I thought "gameplay session" would be self explanatory   Is there a different term you'd prefer?  At that moment, I couldn't think of anything else.

 

>I like the game and the looks, effects etc...

However, I don't like that debugging-like coordinates print on the bottom left.

 

The rules are quite simple, maybe I'd add them to the trailer.

 

Yeah, I'm not going to include that in my actual trailer.  I forgot to disable that before making the recordings.

 

And instead of the first screen of obvious text, I'll find an interesting way of explaining the rules of the game.

 

Thanks for the replies so far.  I really appreciate it.

 

Shogun.

 


Here's something I've learned being in bands. When challenged, it is never a good response to say "Well, X project did it and they made trillions of monies and got all the ladies". You cannot count on one success being repeatable for any reason. You should make it as close to perfect as possible before releasing it. Perfect doesn't always be polished. It could be perfect low budget charm. What that means to you is one thing but what it means to us (whose opinion you asked) is another. 



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Posted 29 March 2013 - 03:35 AM

Here's something I've learned being in bands. When challenged, it is never a good response to say "Well, X project did it and they made trillions of monies and got all the ladies". You cannot count on one success being repeatable for any reason. You should make it as close to perfect as possible before releasing it. Perfect doesn't always be polished. It could be perfect low budget charm. What that means to you is one thing but what it means to us (whose opinion you asked) is another. 

 

I do agree with this.  

 

This project didn't come to mind simply because "it worked for one game", I was just trying to say that (okay, this is likely going to piss some people off) it doesn't need to look like your every day, run of the mill, indie game to be successful.  When things start looking typical, to me, my interest fades fast.  Especially with FPS games; haven't played a unique or impressive one since Killzone for PS2.

 

If you don't try something different from the norm, how do you know if it will work?  That's my philosophy.

 

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#16 Krohm   Crossbones+   -  Reputation: 2916

Posted 29 March 2013 - 04:19 AM

I actually think the trailer is pretty good!



#17 BladeOfWraith   Members   -  Reputation: 245

Posted 29 March 2013 - 06:48 AM

2. I didn't include a release date at the end.
3. I didn't include a link, or mention my website.

This isn't the sort of game to build hype around anyway. Leave that to Halo. I'd say the only time to make a video for distribution to the public is once your game is available for download. 

 

You are correct about adding a link. People are lazy and the number who will click the link you provide is going to be a lot higher than the number who bother to go type "loop-til" into their search bar. If you host your game on your main site, you've accomplished both at the same time. If they follow a link to your game then they're on your site :)


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#18 blueshogun96   Crossbones+   -  Reputation: 792

Posted 29 March 2013 - 01:05 PM

2. I didn't include a release date at the end.
3. I didn't include a link, or mention my website.

This isn't the sort of game to build hype around anyway. Leave that to Halo. I'd say the only time to make a video for distribution to the public is once your game is available for download. 

 

You are correct about adding a link. People are lazy and the number who will click the link you provide is going to be a lot higher than the number who bother to go type "loop-til" into their search bar. If you host your game on your main site, you've accomplished both at the same time. If they follow a link to your game then they're on your site smile.png

 

Well, as far as building "hype" goes in my mind, I was thinking it would be a good idea at least build some awareness though a few sites that review these sort of games so that people can at least hear what others have to say.  I try not to underestimate any form of free advertising like word of mouth.  Building hype isn't necessary, but building awareness of some kind would take more than just a [well designed] trailer itself. smile.png

 

And I agree with your last statement too.  The site needs to be ready, either the main website, or a subdomain of your main website dedicated to the game at least (main website is most important though).  smile.png


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#19 blueshogun96   Crossbones+   -  Reputation: 792

Posted 04 April 2013 - 11:26 PM

Okay, I'm not sure whether I should create another topic or bump this thread, so I'll take my chances with the latter. Sorry if that was a poor choice...

 

Me and a friend of mine have been discussing a few things about this game, like the best way to market it, what it's worth, etc.

 

So I thought I'd ask all of you, would it be something you'd pay $1.99 on the app store to download, or would you rather see a free version of it and possibly pay for an enhanced/deluxe version using the same engine and more features after playing the free version?  I've never been in the position to sell anything I've coded until now.  Selling for 99 cents is something I prefer to avoid at all costs (tbh, I'd rather make it free then risk falling into the 99 cent "crap" category) unless the game already has a good fan base to the point where people see the name/developer and will gladly/faithfully try it.  The conversation we had started to make me rethink my marketing strategy (at least the sale part of it).

 

Overall, I don't think it's something to stress over since this is more than likely going to be one big learning experience and I should probably be focusing on the bigger projects more as I continue to try to build a good track record.

 

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#20 way2lazy2care   Members   -  Reputation: 782

Posted 05 April 2013 - 06:50 AM

I'm not really the typical mobile game player, but I can tell you for certain that I have bought only 1 game that made me pay for it before I could try it. I would definitely release a limited or ad supported free version and a premium version.

If you haven't released your trailer yet, I'd agree that your logo needs polish, and the font on your font slides could probably be changed or made more interesting. Simple is fine, but it's lacking some professional polish that gave the game an amatuer feel it probably doesn't deserve.




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