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#1 Bluefarmer   Members   -  Reputation: 180

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Posted 23 November 2013 - 02:47 PM

Hi, 

 

I just finished this large scale orchestral piece and would appreciate to hear what you think of it. 

It could be used during the final battle or set piece of a game or movie. 

 

https://soundcloud.com/robertblaauboer/ruin-and-preservation

 

Thanks 

 

 



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#2 JackMusic   Members   -  Reputation: 315

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Posted 26 November 2013 - 10:49 AM

The variety of textures is really nice and the inner parts add a sense of fullness to the sound. At the moment I can hear a lot of ideas but also a lot of repetition of that first basic idea. Instead of coming up with loads of things that fit with that first idea, I think you should try to develop that melody into something with more shape, The simplest thing you could do is move the motif up and down the scale to find a nice answering phrase. Then come back to it and start thinking about extra accompaniment parts. Also the ending needs something more satisfying, maybe a held low note from the bass trombones or something similar.



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Posted 17 December 2013 - 01:32 PM

it sounds prity good!


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#4 Bluefarmer   Members   -  Reputation: 180

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Posted 18 December 2013 - 03:21 AM

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I agree with you on the repetition. I might rework this piece a bit or use your feedback on next pieces. 



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Posted 28 December 2013 - 11:30 AM

That sounds awesome, would it be too much to ask what software you used to produce this?



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Posted 04 January 2014 - 02:41 PM

I mixing is top quality! I'm interested to know what sample set(s) were involved here. I've primarily been using EWQL Silver and it's saturated with a bunch of hall reverb that you can't shut off or turn down so it's hard to get this kind of clarity. They're great samples other than that, but I don't always want that much reverb so I may be shopping for some new stuff soon.

 

Structurally I would agree about the repetition. Jack Music made some very good points about it that I can agree with. Otherwise, GREAT track.


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