Resume:

- First paragraph is just a big block of text. That's a good way to get information you want to convey skipped.

- Not crazy about the two column layout.

- Include an HTML version on top of your pdf and doc version.

- Broadly, I can infer a lot of what you did but I can't be certain. This isn't what you want. As an example at random, what did you do for the project "Photorealistic architectural renders" for somerset college? I can guess from your left column list of skills, but I can't be sure.

- I hate the two background colors. Stick to white background with black text with bolding/etc as needed.

Website:

- I would want to see the demo video on the first page.

- Demo video (of Evoland-esque game). I understand why you put the 3d level last, but you may want to show that first to show off your 3d skills. I'm just concerned someone looking at this won't make it all the way through the video before writing off the block art.

- You're aiming for artist/developer. For your first job, you really should concentrate on one. I think it's a strength that you can do a bit of code, as well, but for the first position a mix like that comes across as "doesn't know what they want".

- Like in the resume, it wasn't fully clear your role with the game project. I suspect if you played a substantial role, you have a fair bit to show. You just need to inform your reader better.

Your portfolio says you're a modeler who has been exposed to code. Look for jobs as a modeler.

As for your resume, show rather than tell. Use more descriptive text to tell what you did on projects. The entire column "Skills and experience" should be removed, use those words as part of the descriptions of a project. On this project used Mudbox; on that project used UVW unwrapping, on this other built the rigging and joint constraints for bipedal animation.

If possible, add do your web page with more models of more types. Modelers make EVERYTHING that exists in the game, environment like rocks and trees and flowers and shrubs and dirt piles; buildings from outhouses and shacks to sprawling modern cities from many eras and locations; vehicles from carts and wagons to modern cars and tanks to futuristic spaceships; furniture like chairs and benches and sofas and historic thrones; food from candy wrappers to cereal boxes to sprawling feasts; bags and backpacks, clothing from all eras, books and bookshelves, and on and on. The more variety you can showcase, the stronger your portfolio is.

The resume is better, but you are still telling rather than showing.

You tell for your lecturer position that you had "critical approaches to creative media products". I have no idea what that is supposed to mean. You tell that you "Creative media production management project". Are those lectures you gave? Are those projects you created with your students? Are those something else? You told about them, but you didn't show what you actually did.

You show in your Freelance Artist section that you "Used architectural plans and designs to ensure an accurate 3D representation of a building that is currently under construction. Realistic lighting & rendering with Mental Ray". Excellent! You showed what you did in a way I can understand.

As you are a recent graduate (as of four months ago) you should have education first. The items in your schooling are stronger selling points than your work history anyway. As a recent grad you are being hired as an entry level worker.

It is abundantly clear you are trying to pad your short life history by making lots of bullet points. Stop it. Employers *KNOW* you are an entry level worker, and they can see right through it. Padding encourages employers to dump the application in favor of someone more honest. Make it clear you are an entry level modeler with some interesting projects, instead of trying to make it look like you've got history you don't.

Also I'm assuming your "Freelance Landscape Gardener" from estimated ages 15-18 means that you mowed ONE family's lawn on weekends. If you did something more than that, such as actually working for a real landscape company, put the name of the company. Otherwise, give me a scale I can work with, like "Mowed Lawns for X homes". Or mowed and watered. Or mowed, watered, planned and weeded flowerbeds. Otherwise I'm going to assume you have an old widow in your neighborhood who paid you for doing a single yard no matter how crappy the job was. But at least you were mostly dependable.

I would tighten up the text a little bit so you don't have lines with one or two words on them, favoring paragraphs that use the whole line. Then I'd remove lines like "references are available on request", remove white space, and get it down to a single page.

As an entry level modeler an employer is going to glance over your paper -- which should be a single page -- and then if they are interested they'll hit your web site.

I still think you should add additional variety to your portfolio if you can, right now everything is modern architecture and room interiors. What you have shows you can do some modeling, but without evidence my worry is that you cannot handle a variety of styles or types. There is no range. Excellent portfolios cover a range of styles from realistic to exaggerated comic styles, and a wide range of scenes, objects, animals, and people within those varied styles. Show me not just an ultramodern kitchen, but a comic-style giraffe, old west-style outhouses, constrained and shadowy horror rooms, and light and airy fantasy environments. You're a beginner so you may not have them, but the more variety you can demonstrate, the stronger your portfolio will become. Add to your portfolio as you develop your talents.