Alright well this is as far as I could get...there are still some details I need to get into the scene and I'm way over the poly limit [not a good combination]...the loading dock alone is about 29,000 triangles...which is just insane [when you factor in motion blur / shadows / etc]...mostly because of the crane. I bought it online, it was about 30k triangles when I got it, I took it down to about 10k, and added it to the scene. Also each one of those cargo containers is 1k triangles...which is easily reducable.
I need to add more details into the building on the right. Adding a gutter area to the roof should do the trick.
Well I've spent enough time on this...time to get back to programming, I've got a lot of work to do in regards to the traffic system so that's what I get to work on for the next few days.