Does this seem right

gamesmaster2 · 2002-08-03T00:05:05

Alright I''m making this story for a rpg.It follows a young girl named Tamara that goes to this kinda military academy for future knights.Trouble starts at this town called Tul''me .The monsters have been acting up all over lately but it finally comes to a head at this town but since the monsters around this town are known to be low level they send a group of cadets out for a training session. When you get there monsters are ravaging the town.You fight your way through the town sooner or later you meet a girl named Demetria.Demetria is part of the last group of soldiers that went into Tul''me when the trouble first started .Demetria is extremely rattled because she''s a rookie and she watched all her fellow soldiers die at the hands of creatures that weren''t normally found near Tul''me.I say watched because the rookie was terrified and couldn''t act. Alright after you defeat the main monster and have a talk with a demonness named Terra you black out (Tamara has this cool Transformation ability but it takes a lot out of her).Terra takes a glowing orb off of the pedastal. You wake up later in Stovo.You have a little conversation with Demetria and she tells you what happened and that she received orders to go to Denevan for court martial.You have to decide whether you''re going to stand by her side when she gets to Denevan or are you going to leave her to her fate.Either way you get charged with bringing her in for court martial. Alright you have a few more adventures on your way to Denevan a side quest where you get a chance to pick up a new character.A visit to a old wise man to find out more about the object that Terra took from the church. And then you go to Denevan. The people of course can''t stand Demetria and if you chose to Stand by her they can''t really stand you either.Guilty by association. Alright here''s where I''m getting to the point of this post.Alright you''re having the trial but somewhere in the middle of it (pretty much at the beginning I didn''t want to bore anyone).The intruder alert sounds.Monsters have infiltrated the base.Alright depending on your choice if you chose to stand by Demetria she joins your party and you race to fight the advancing demon horde and then fight another boss at the end of it.And by you and Demetria''s swift action exonerate her from the court martial.If you chose to not stand by her then Terra is with the demon horde and she liberates Demetria and ask her to join them.Since noone stood by her she joins them.(How''s that for consequences).Alright either way you have to fight a boss and after the fight is over the boss makes some comment about an attack on WrenWorth the military academy you came from and the fact that you can''t be in two places at once. You race over to Wrenworth either by foot if you didn''t take the side quest and got the teleportation amulet or you teleport there if you did.You fight more monsters and you run into downed soldiers that tell you the main monsters are in the basement level command center and that the leader had started a self destruct sequence.You race against time to defeat the remaining monsters and defeat the boss there but after you defeat him you try to stop the self destruct but you can''t.The only thing you can do is reset the device to give you and the others enough time to escape.You fight your way back out and once you get out.WrenWorth is destroyed but your true quests to find the remaining orbs and to stop the demon gate from opening begins. My question basically is do you think giving the sequence of events .Do you think WrenWorth gets destoryed too soon.I mean you want the player to feel some sense of loss.How can I convey that.Any suggestions.I know it was long but I wanted to give you sense of the length of time between starting the quest and WrenWorth''s destruction . The road to hell is paved in good intentions

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Started by gamesmaster2 July 23, 2002 07:19 PM

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August 03, 2002 12:05 AM

hehehe perfect!!!Rhelik is the name of the head instructor.He would fit the bill perfectly.He''s like the founder of WrenWorth so it works with the story perfectly.If Fenris (that''s the bosses name at the WrenWorth stage) kills Rhelik then WrenWorth pretty much dies with him and I''m not stuck in the arkward position of Tamara asking Rhelik for a leave of absence.
Which frees her to go on this quest. Thanks guys.

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