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Hi all. Been kinda quiet in here - partly my fault since I haven''t been posting. Haven''t been able to think of anything writing-related to say that I hadn''t already said. Until tonight! So... I was reading one of the anime-related message boards I''m a member of, and somebody made a thread asking for suggestions sbout how to come up with the ''perfect'' anime script - a pretty normal occurrence, right? But what did they ask for? Examples of emotion-evoking character dynamics? Nail-biting, edge-of-your seat plots? Wondorous worldbuilding? Hilarous humor? Nope. They wanted a list of cool ''powers'' and ''attacks'' so they could pile them all onto the main character and have him go around slicing, dicing, and julianneing generic ''bad guys'' like some sort of walking cuisinart. >.< Gag me with a spoon. So that''s why I''m posting this _here_ where I know some of the forum members are actually smart enough to comprehend it. (Actually this will probably be too basic for most of you, but bear with me here, I have to start somewhere.) Somebody Wants Something You have no story - nada, zip, zilch - unless and until you have one character who wants something: that''s Motivation . They set out to get it and run into problems: that''s Conflict . The problems get more thorny, the goal tantalizingly close to being realized or lost forever (Rising Action ) until... The Climax! The problem is nullified, perhaps by being solved, perhaps by the realization that the problem can''t be solved, or was misunderstood all along and the propoposed ''solution'' wouldn''t actually solve anything. At the same time, the man character(s) have grown in some way - either by changing themseves to suit the world, or reaffirming their resolve to stay the same and change the world to suit them. Let the reader down gently by exprssingyour moral and wrapping up loose ends in the Resolution and NOW you''ve got yourself a real story. Maybe it''s not a great story, but it''s definitely a story. So... how do we make a _great_ story? Who Wants What? There are only so many possible human motivations. Here''s a little list: - fear/protection/defensiveness - anger/dislike/revenge - rivalry/competition/urge to dominance - desire to be helpful/useful/submissive/loyal - ambition/need to live up to personal mythology/vow - loneliness or other desire/lust - desire to be part of a group/good citizen - curiosity/boredom/love of mayhem - whimsy/playfulness I''ve probably forgotten something, but that''s most of them anyway. So those are types of motivation, and they suggest categories of desired object. Now when I say object, don''t fall into the trap of thinking the character has to want some sort of literal physical object. That''s called a foozle, and I''m sure we''ve all done enouh fetch quests in RPGs to realize that foozle stories suck. I don''t care how cool your foozle is - whether you call it the O-Part or the One Piece or the Dragon Ball or the Shinzahao or the Thingamabob of Ultimate Wish-Granting, foozle stories still suck. Spare us, please. So if it''s not a foozle, what is this mysterious ''desired object''? Well, as I said, each type of motivation has it''s own. Loneliness/love/lust is probably the simplest, and yet still complex enough that millions of romance stories have been written based on it without using up all the potential stories that can be generated from this type of motivation. It also happens to be my favorite motivation, so I''ll use it as an example. A character motivated by loneliness or lust or love wants another character, whether as a friend or a one-night stand or as a permanent lover; they might want to perform some specific physical act with this person or have some particular type of relationship with them - the details are what make every story a ''unique snowflake'' as it were, so be creative. One definition of a story might be "the changing relationship between the character and the object of his desire". Fiction Is As Fiction Does Fiction is, at base, a form of entertainment, so the only true measure of a story''s ''greatness'' is its effect on its audiece. Entertainment is all about manipulatng people''s mind and emotions in various ways, and when a story pushes all the right buttons with the right timing and intensity, the audiences is satisfied and will clamor for more. So what does it take to satisfy an audience? What are they searching for in our stories? It''s not just about showing them something new and surprising to alleviate their boredom, although that''s important. You gotta catharsize their emotions - make them laugh and worry, be fearful and amazed, go ''awww'' with pity and coo at cuteness, be angry at injustice and righteously satisfied when it get fixed, you gotta stroke their egos, make tham feel better about themselves and their lives, and so on. And as if that isn''t hard enough, they also want to feel like they learned something, so you have to put in some interesting exposition and probaby also some insightful philosophizing about people, life, emotions, morals, and that sort of thing. But of course you can''t be preachy, audiences hate that. On top of all that you have people looking to you for wish fullfillment and escapism, to "fulfill desires no more than partly satisfied by life" and "experience an imaginary world more lifelike than life itself, more directly and honestly concerned with essential problems, more supple in its expression of every aspect of man’s nature, less burdened by distracting irrelevancies". They aren''t just looking for a better place to go and more interesting situation to be in, they''re looking for someone to be - material that they can use to build their personal mythologies and identities. And finally many people are lonely and are searching for soulbrothers and fantasy romantic objects among your charaters, so if you want to satisfy that segment of your audience you need to provide vivid, deep, and appealing characters for your audience to identify with and lust over. Do all that and you should theoretically get a great story. Do you all agree? What else do you think is necessary to make a great story?

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I dont have anything to add. I can barely confirm the things youve said, being just the amaeture that I am. But I really like the things youve said, and the way you said them. Since Im more of a member of the audience community rather than the writers community, I can say that the points youve made are whats important, not that I just want to be entertained for lack of anything beter to do.

Just a shame that so many good points in one post should go unanswered. Hopefully, the real writers in this forum (as you pointed out, theres real talent around here) will have something to add so. With all the expertise, and a opening for a new thread like sun has started for us here, there''s real substance here to have a good conversation.

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Where can I find some of your writings?

I''ve been sitting here trying to figure out how to start this reply for a while, but I still don''t know what to say. I read this post thinking, "Well, let''s see why this only has one reply... I''m bored, so I might as well take a stab at answering it." Then I realized that you don''t have a problem that needs answering. Instead, you are one of the few people here who actually knows what a story is and how to write it. If you have any stories etc. that you''ve written that I could read, I''d love to read them, because even your post kept me hooked, and I''m interested in seeing how you actually write.

My email address is DarkSide3174@yahoo.com

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ok perhaps than, story guru that you are; you could help come up with ideas for this game concept:

The base conflict is that some demon/person/or otherwise ( havent decided yet) wants to control humanity via it''s dreams.
So the antagonist kidnaps the nine muses to rob humanity of its creativity, and thus he/she/it can subvert its own will apon humanity. The protagonists ( a young boy, a young girl and her alive in her dreams stuffed animal) must fight through their dreams and nightmares to save the muses.

what help i need with is:

what would be good twists to add,
what/who should the antagonist be,
and what style of game should it be?

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Original post by sunandshadow
I''ve probably forgotten something, but that''s most of them anyway. So those are types of motivation, and they suggest categories of desired object. Now when I say object, don''t fall into the trap of thinking the character has to want some sort of literal physical object. That''s called a foozle, and I''m sure we''ve all done enouh fetch quests in RPGs to realize that foozle stories suck. I don''t care how cool your foozle is - whether you call it the O-Part or the One Piece or the Dragon Ball or the Shinzahao or the Thingamabob of Ultimate Wish-Granting, foozle stories still suck. Spare us, please.



I disagree, a foozle story can be good and some of the best stories ever written are foozle stories. The problem is to often writers make the mistake when writting a foozle story in not realizing that the retreving the foozle is the character''s motivation and should not be the focous of the story. Instead the story if done right is about the journey, and the interpersonal relationships that are built along the way, as the main characters bond, and overcome obstacles together.


One thing that goes into making a great story is multiple layers. The story has many layers of meaning to it, that brings across a story on the personal level that also has a higher level that gets across a grander message.

For example my favorite anime series, "Legend of Black Heaven" deals with the life of a man who was rock star in his youth, and now lives with his wife and kid, in a small one bedroom apartment. He works in an office had has a dull, uneventful and unhappy life, until one day when a a young 20 year old woman invites him to play his music again. The story also has a higher level where it portarys how music can change the universe and bring hope and happiness to everyone who hears it.



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yes foozle stories should be based on the journey being the focus because we all know the end is meant to be acquiring the whatevermabober and the resolution of that quest. this mirrors life we all know we die so the meaning of the journey must be the experience of the journeying(sp).

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There are several samples of my writing available on the net for you to look at. Most of them are incomplete, a lot of them are gay romances, a few of them are erotica you should be 18 to read, and some are fanfiction that wouldn't make much sense unless you'd seen the original movies or anime series. o.O I have some song lyrics and poetry around also, but that's probably not what you were looking for since this thread is about fiction.

So here are links and descriptions of some of my pieces of fiction:

_Shapers and Shaped_ - Short, g-rated MMORPG creation story

_Jessop's Story_ - Furry alien children start going to kindergarden. ^_^ Rated pg-13. 7 1/2 chapters, somewhat fragmentary.

_Hearts Or Nello_ - Complete! ^_^ Cute little historical bisexual romance arrnged marriage story. Rated PG-15 for discussion of bisexuality, but really very innocent. Not actually the sequal to _Jessop's Story_, even though the characters have mostly the same names.


_As the Moon Loves the Sun_ - Lord of the Rings fanfic with the pairing Faramir/Grima Wormtongue/Eowyn Rated PG-15 for discussion of homosexuality, but no explicit sex. Complete, but with a sequel intended but never written.



***Stuff below this point is only for readers over 18!***


_Facepaint_ - My personal favorite of everything I have written. Fanfic for the anime series Fushigi Yuugi, rated NC-17 for explicit homosexual sex among other things. 10 chapters, ongoing

_Uke On Top_ - Script for an original historical anime, rated NC-17 for homosexual sex and attempted suicide. About 85% complete. Drawings of these characters are available if you are interested.

_Howl Together_ - OMG heterosexual sex?! Did I really write this? A twist on the idea of werewolves. Rated NC-17 for explicit heterosexual sex and beastiality. 2 chapters.



Please let me know if you have a problem opening any of the files.

[edited by - sunandshadow on June 3, 2004 9:18:47 PM]

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Someone beat me to posting about foozle stories. I was going to say the same thing that TechnoGoth said, with one addition: Even though I beleive that a good foozle story can be written, I have never read/seen one.

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If only I could just write them down...

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quote:
Original post by sunandshadow
What else do you think is necessary to make a great story?



Good characters.

Rurouni Kenshin is a popular manga with a really crappy plotline: you have several heroes, the heroes fight an opponent, fight another opponet, fight a third opponent and so on. Despite the crappy plotline, it''s very popular because the author created four very good characters Kenshin, Aoshi, Misao, Tomoe. It''s interesting to see that readers do not care about crappy and cliche plotline as long as there are some good characters, this totally contradict the popular myth that story with cliche plotline sucks.

There are other manga like Get Backers/Bremen/Blackcat with the heroes fighting opponents after opponents, but they are not as popular as Kenshin, because they lack good characters.

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Original post by vaneger
ok perhaps than, story guru that you are; you could help come up with ideas for this game concept:

The base conflict is that some demon/person/or otherwise ( havent decided yet) wants to control humanity via it''s dreams.
So the antagonist kidnaps the nine muses to rob humanity of its creativity, and thus he/she/it can subvert its own will apon humanity. The protagonists ( a young boy, a young girl and her alive in her dreams stuffed animal) must fight through their dreams and nightmares to save the muses.

what help i need with is:

what would be good twists to add,
what/who should the antagonist be,
and what style of game should it be?




There isn''t that much to go on here.... Maybe you should try to flesh it out a little bit and then ask for some help with it.

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