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I think that a chimney above a window isn't right, to use a chimney it needs to be above a fire place of some kind.

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looks good to me, but those textures need proper uv coordinates (like in the roof), for a w.i.p, its looking really good :P, keep up

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Oh yes i forgot to fix the side of the roof, i got everything else i believe, correct.

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fixed the uv


EDIT: does anybody think the bricks on the outer walls look stretched?

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Fixed the bricks stretchyness as well as the uv, uploaded to the above image, is there anything else wrong here?

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hi again, the fire place looks a bit wierd, you could go for one like this:

Fireplace


the distnace from the top of your door to the roof is to small, the roof middle should be more tall to, the outer wall cant be bricks, or at least red bricks, what game are you going for ? mediavel ? try stone or white walls with planks of wood, like this:
house

besides that looks good to me, try add a little detail to the outside of the windows.

keep up.

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No the game will be in the present, whcih is why i went with bricks.

EDIT: and thats a metal stained fireplace, I saw a few at home depo that look similar.

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if it is metal, you should give it another texture or else, it's look like the wall. Maybe, if possible, a texture more bright or shiny.

By the way, I like the floor ;)

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