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Hello, you may know me, because I posted a story a while back. I am going to post all my freaking information. I made the plot, but I need a writer to put it into story format, one readable by a game maker. So I shall give you may plot, and if you agree, I will send you more info. Plot to Ronen Children Plot Time line 1 Before Any Recorded Time Long ago, their was no real form of matter or soul. The universe was filled of what was simply the absence of light, of matter. Though this darkness was not a solid form, it was called an abyss, because everything had to eventually be named. This "nothing" was like a bag, holding all the other elements inside of it. So after a long period of time, or so it seems, no one really knows, the abyss shattered, bringing life to the first god, who people would soon worship as Shiro. Shiro sat in the darkness for a long time, always knowing something was wrong. Eventually, he heard a scream, a plea for help. At last, the other spirits were out of the dormant state they held in the abyss. So, of course, Shiro destroyed the abyss, and out flew the many materials of life needed form the earth, including the gods of earth. But the lessor gods were jealous of Shiro’s power, and rebelled in a mad attempt to kill their powerful leader, and spread the energy to themselves like Shiro did to the abyss. And the war known as The Betrayal began. This war slowly deteriorated the earth until few people were left alive. This era in the world was called the dark ages, because all records of it were long destroyed by the survivors, people didn’t need to know. Shiro, to end this age of terror, split his power into the original energies, placed it in a temple, and, since Shiro no longer had any trust in the lesser gods, hired the Knights of Shiro, immortal men and women with extraordinary talents, and hired them to guard this temple. Little did he know that this would be not simply ending a threat on earth, but beginning one threatening even the heavens. Plot Time line 2 (Year 134-165) Kairi was the goddess of stealth. She married a mortal and gave birth to a child named Sorasen, and a child named Marie (Sorasen was named to mean, opposite sky, as chaos was reverse of whatever mixed with it.) Of course, like Hercules or any other demigod, Sorasen bor extreme strength, mind, and knowledge. Through his father, the chaos soldier Havoc, Sorasen learned of the power of Shiro, the guardians of Shiro forming a barrior keeping people from it, and the amazing strength. Sorasen was not tempted to take the power, for he had no reason, but Havoc was a real warrior. He wanted his son to do what he had always failed to. Havoc killed Marie, and placed her soul in a human body, destroying her memorys. Why did the world have to be so cruel? Sorasen would think. Why can we not escape death. Why... By now he was a Rank A Guardian, and, with a meeting with Shiro, Sorasen got the power for guardian reasons. But Sorasen had other plans. He was to be the new ruler, and to get his revenge. He was to destroy all, for, he believed that if he did so, he would be able to take the souls, and, like his father, move them into beings. He would place all mankind into Heaven, where no one could live or die. These too people were the only other Rank As in the world, as their were 26 rankings. More importantly, they watched and witnessed it happen, they saw Sorasen take the power. And, though Shiro said he could, they knew more about the impurity of humankind. They stopped Sorasen 50% through the formation, and gave the power to their real son, Itsuki, and their 2nd cousin, Riku, and sent them in a boat to an unknown part of the world. Sorasen, in fury, used the 50% to kill the two humans. Now he needed to get to Riku and Itsuki, to get the power, and become the master as he planned, but how... Now Sorasen was only half as strong as he thought he could be. He needed that power, and he was going to get it. His wrath was only starting. He created powerful monsters to do his bidding (he could do this), which spread across the earth, wreaking havoc across the world, and got stronger the closer he was to them. He built his castle which bases in the center of the earth, which only someone with a strong spiritual sense could see, meaning, you’d have to be dead or something. This castle was known as Makai. But the parents were much smarter than youd expect. They sent Riku and Itsuki as far as possible, an orphanage in the north of the world, and, to stop people from knowing that THEY had the power at all, formed them in special “keys.” These keys were the spirits of a phoenix and dragon, entirely made of energy like the energy of the elemental spirits, meaning they could be formed into a body when needed, with extreme difficulty. These keys were needed to unlock Riku and Itsuki’s power. With the sudden arrival of these strange monsters, the churches, of course, were questioning. For they lacked logic, as believed Shiro was doing this to them, even though he had no power to do so. They did some investigating, and figured it out. On the other hand, they didn’t have the expected reaction. They lost their respect for Shiro, saying that thier job was to support the most powerful ruler, and, this was Sorasen now. They simply told the public that the new monsters were caused by their greatest sins. Apparently, these sins escape because human-kind’s expedition into the center of the earth, and that continuing it would only make the monsters stronger. They pretended to still worship Shiro, and blmaed him, asking for forgiveness. Little did anyone remember that Shiro was powerless, but alive all the less. He used his body to form in the body of Zacharias, a young apprentice at the young age of ten. The church, of course, figured this out, and sent Zack on a suicide mission. Time Line Part 3 (year 165-167) Zack and Vince were brothers. Actually, more than brothers. Vince was 10 years older than Zack, and this age difference made Vince more of a father to Zack than a brother. Vince felt strongly about right and wrong, and had made his own definition. Right, to him, was what Shiro wanted, and wrong was what could hurt Shiro. If Shiro made the world, he thought, then Shiro made the rules as well. He knew that the church spent their entire life worshiping this god, and, since it was what was right, Vince sent Zack to this church. Years later, Shiro was defeated, and Vince, knowing that Shiro was powerless, went to tell the church. His reaction was less than satisfied. But Zack was attached to the church, and he refused to believe that Vince was telling the truth, that the church was working for Sorasen. Zack and Vince spread apart, never to see each other. Marie was banished from the very heavens, in the body of a girl with no memories. The only thing she was left with was a coin clutched in her hands, with a phoenix on it. This coin unlocked the power of Riku’s soul, and was grabbed by Marie so she could maybe help Riku and Itsuki before she was sent to earth. Marie was left with no memories of her past or her powers, and is in an endless search to find them. She was marveled at by people for her stealth skills, and was hired as a spy, soon becoming a shinobi. She believes that if she keeps this job, she’ll eventually find somewhat who can tell her past. 11 years later, the boys brake out of the orphanage, and begin their search. And this is the adventure, of Ronen Children.

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What did I miss???????????? Why does no one replie?

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I dunno, its worth a try, it is not?

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You're not exactly offering any incentive to tackle the job - so to repeat S&S's comment, why would anyone want to write your story for you? Are you offering payment, a writing credit on the game, what?

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Well, this is pretty much how they do it in the game business. The director comes up with the basic concept for the story, then gets a writer (usually a freelance writer, or someone in the company with multiple talents) to toss it into a script. Also, scenario writers are the ones who come up with the little events that occur in between the actual story. But sometimes the director will write the entire script.

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Well, of course I offer to add you to the credits as my equal. Also, I dunno, writing for fun could be cool too. But mainly a credits thing. And if the game gets any money, ill be glad to give you some.

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I for one can't write anyone else's premises, whether it's fiction or not--as you can imagine, it's hell with schoolwork. :P

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Quote:
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And if the game gets any money, ill be glad to give you some.


So your making a commercial game?

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This does in fact, depend... When the game is finished, I'll pretend its not and put a demo for download somewhere. If it gets good enough reviews, it will become a commercial game. If its not a commercial game, I'll make a "Make a donation" thing, even though no one ever clicks on those.

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