it looks great, the music is nice too. But, "not much to say" with the cd writer and only "done for Eskaro project" for the staircase seriously downgrades the renders and makes it sound as if you're ashamed in it. Being bashful with "Nothing special" with the kitchen sink also makes it really seem like nothing special. You don't have to say that they're all great and perfect, but make the descriptions more like the mp3 player one where it demonstrates your thinking process IMHO.