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Well, it's a painfully strange perspective, to start with. The antennae is a bit bulky, and probably shouldn't use that particular texture (and neither should the roof, for that matter, which is also bulky and unusual). I'm not sure why the roof extends down through the middle of the house.

Also, it looks Lego-ish for some reason. But it isn't bad - just keep working on it, and grab a picture of a house for reference.

What is this for? Maybe some more information would help us critique it in a more useful way...

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Go out and look at similar buildings to get reference, right now it doesn't really work structurally or themeatically.
The antennae is poorly designed
The roof capping shouldn't be made of stone
The bricks, if that's what they are, are way too large, and if they are concrete blocks, they shouldn't be red (unless they are painted)
The red color is way too bright for any paint
The capping extends down in the middle of the building- why?
And lastly, PLEASE take renders from a perspective, not an isometric one. Right now you are using a non-perspective/orthagonal camera in a non-isometric camera spot which is very disorienting.

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I was just creating a house for when i make my game, (dunno wich one yet:P)
I wanted this to be a mountain sort of house so i used that roof texture as that is how i picture a roof of a mountain house:P

As for the unusial part, a mountain house is often unusual:P,
Cuz it isn't made by an architect:P

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Well, go look at pictures of mountain homes... They still don't look like that. Besides, they're usually made of wood. It's a lot easier to find, chop, and build with wood than to cut up the whole danged mountain. And it's unusual because it's impossibly built, not because it wasn't built by an architect...

Also, take Prof's comments to heart. They're excellent.

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Original post by Doja
I wanted this to be a mountain sort of house

It seems like there is a bail of hay in the background of your model. You won't find a bail of hay in the mountains, so perhaps you could decorate your background with more environmentally-conscious items. These will, in turn, add to the overall effect of the foreground model.

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