My first game story, feedback required (and most welcomed)

Gilzu · 2001-08-03T21:40:24

Hey, i''ve started writing my first RTS game (thought itll be a good continue for platform game which came better than i expected), so anyway, i started to draw headlines for the main plot and some feedback is req. so the main idea: Remember starship troopers? well, this time we''re (mankind) the arrogent "we''ll destroy your planet bcoz we got on the wrong side of the bed". so the story starts by human invasion to the alien (good guys) planet, and as the game progresses the inferior aliens try to survive the human attack by creating some kind of a new tech. so anyway, the aliens will not be biological beings but mech beings (transformers rule!) and human kind will not see them as an insignificant interruption rather than a own thinking specie. just thought that this time the human should be the bad guys, thinking that if we''ll encounter other beings that will be inferior (noone thought about that option, huh?) that well be too arrogent and try to conquer them, as they are redundant. what do you think? Gil

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Started by Gilzu July 21, 2001 05:47 PM

10 comments, last by Gilzu 22 years, 8 months ago

Anonymous

July 30, 2001 12:30 AM

You can have the humans attack because they think that the aliens are sexy. and all the aliens are hot naked girls with guns and big ass boobies. Just a suggestion.