You might want other people's opinions on the bird names, to hear what others think.

Here's the changed text, it'd be good to get a third opinion as well.

Thank you for the help!

We decided to name the game "Little Flock".

Here's the description:

LITTLE FLOCK.
In this captivating and challenging game you fly with a little flock through the jungle island. As you go, you meet a lot of friends making your flock bigger and bigger. The island is full of surprises that will help you to fly all the way through to the main aim.


LITTLE STORY.
Three tiny birds once found a giant worm. It turned out, however, that the worm was not so easy to catch; the dodger escaped quickly. 
“It must have gone to his friends”, one of the birds said. So, it was decided to follow the fugitive.


BIG FUN:
- Lots of upgrades in the Store.
- 5 Birds-Heroes with exciting power ups.
- Long way through the island with wonderful locations.
- Colorful graphics and cute characters.
- Breathtaking music and sound effects.


Help the birds to find more food!
 

Please guys, look through the text for some words that are bad for native speaker's ear!

I'd appreciate that!

Possible suggestions:


LITTLE FLOCK:
In this captivating and challenging game you fly with a little flock of birds through the jungle island. As you go, you meet a lot of new friends making your flock bigger and bigger. The island is full of surprises that will help you to fly all the way through the jungles to the prize on the other side to the main aim.

LITTLE STORY:
Three tiny birds once found a giant worm. It turned out, however, that the worm was not so as easy to catch as they had expected; the dodger escaped quickly dodging them, the worm quickly escaped.
“He It must have gone to where his friends are for help”, one of the birds said. So, it was decided to follow the fugitive. So they decided to follow the slippery fugitive to find the rest of the worms

BIG FUN:
- Lots of upgrades in the Store for your birds.
- 5 Birds-Heroes Bird Heroes with exciting power ups power-ups.
- Long way through the island with wonderful locations.
- Colorful graphics and cute characters.
- Breathtaking music and sound effects.

Help the birds to catch the worm and find more food!

Servant of the Lord,

You're the best! =)

Thank you for your help!