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Critique on a new track

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Hey guys,

I'm hoping you could have a listen to my latest track and provide some good feed back. I really tried to pay more attention to the dynamics and panning with this new to give it a bit more depth. Also things like volume and how well all the individual instruments sit. Its hard to know where you're going wrong without putting it out there!

http://soundcloud.com/juliandomanski/aim-for-the-weak-spot

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I really like the theme and the bass at the beginning of the piece. I think at .25, the theme itself could have opened up more. What I mean by that is it could have been even more aggressive, to convey the idea that this is a difficult battle, against a very formidable foe. 1:07 is close to the vibe that I envisioned. A somewhat explosive, headstrong feel. I think you have great ideas here (I seriously dig the track) I just feel that the tune itself is a bit anti-climatic for a boss battle, if that makes any sense.

Edited by M4uesviecr

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0:35 brings a high pitched arp. It's not bad, but strains the ear after some time. We wouldn't want to annoy anyone facing the boss for a longer time now, would we? Edited by Kristoff K.

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