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New soundtrack. Feedback appreciated

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JackMusic    325

The variety of textures is really nice and the inner parts add a sense of fullness to the sound. At the moment I can hear a lot of ideas but also a lot of repetition of that first basic idea. Instead of coming up with loads of things that fit with that first idea, I think you should try to develop that melody into something with more shape, The simplest thing you could do is move the motif up and down the scale to find a nice answering phrase. Then come back to it and start thinking about extra accompaniment parts. Also the ending needs something more satisfying, maybe a held low note from the bass trombones or something similar.

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Jonah-B    169

I mixing is top quality! I'm interested to know what sample set(s) were involved here. I've primarily been using EWQL Silver and it's saturated with a bunch of hall reverb that you can't shut off or turn down so it's hard to get this kind of clarity. They're great samples other than that, but I don't always want that much reverb so I may be shopping for some new stuff soon.

 

Structurally I would agree about the repetition. Jack Music made some very good points about it that I can agree with. Otherwise, GREAT track.

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