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Hello!

 

I created this last night and would like some feedback and comments, Its still a work in progress.

 

[sketchfab]f86559a0f26849e2bce2713500108745[/sketchfab]

 

Since this thread got some replies I decided to see how far I can take the sci-fi set.

 

Here is a little something I made in a few hours. comments and suggestions welcome.

[sketchfab]0cfce6eb150445cc8480a52f0eee5111[/sketchfab]

 

 

Thanks!

Edited by Besieger1

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I dont know... These things seem to be poping up more and more. (not a bad thing just.... i dont know)

 

The overally design isnt bad. Need to know limitations before I start nitpicking. The only real concern I have is that your grip goes all the way back. The scope screen is square when the tool for it is trapizoid, and there is no screen on the front of the device for the scope tool.

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It looks nice! What scale is it supposed to be viewed at? It looks especially nice (retaining detail) zoomed out a distance, but more low-res when zoomed up-close.

I especially like how you used two darker strips of grey in the side's middle 'rail' area, and how it tricks my eye into seeing it in-dented without any extra polygon costs.

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I dont know... These things seem to be poping up more and more. (not a bad thing just.... i dont know)

 

The overally design isnt bad. Need to know limitations before I start nitpicking. The only real concern I have is that your grip goes all the way back. The scope screen is square when the tool for it is trapizoid, and there is no screen on the front of the device for the scope tool.

I think I understand what your saying(Lots of strange terms trapizoid, overally)

 

Im not sure what you meant by limitations, the grip is based on a style choice as the weapon as you can see is very sci-fi. The scope is something I am working on as such the front does not have any texture yet and is using the base color of grey. 

 

Edit: What did you mean "These things seem to be poping up more and more". I have been looking for this type of style for little while, could you link some examples you have seen?

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