Hi!

Need your help and criticism (as tough as possible) if you find some time to look my art through.

I'm only starting and it's my first house.

Thanks!

Thanks!

Isn't it too dark?

It looks nice. The only two things that pop out is that the rocks on the side look a little flat or somehow off. And the few spots that only have one shade of brown could probably use a second as everywhere else is a mixture. But this is really just nitpicking.

Thanks a lot for the feedback!

I've just got distracted with the light wood and didn't pay enough attention to the dark one. Next time I'll be more careful.

Thanks again

Very nice, the only criticism I have is about the grass on the roof.

You are probably going to use this in a game with isometric 2D tiling, anyone quickly looking at the image could mistake the roof for a floor, because grass usually is on the ground floor. Not that grass couldn't grow on the roof and it does look good.

The roof tiles them self look good without the grass and if you remove it, you can use the effect for ground tiles.

The dark color gives a nice feeling of strength so no need to brighten it. Looks like it's made from black iron wood, strong stuff to make a house from.

Thanks a lot!

I was just drawing it for the future portfolio. But I'll keep this in mind when drawing smth like this for the game.

Thanks a lot for such a detailed feedback.

I don't like the window as well but I didn't know how to fix it. Now I know! Thanks again. I'll try to give it an abandoned look.

I dont think glass would be used on this type of house. to me its like putting a glass window on a castle. I think wooden shutters would be more appropriate. I am a beginner as well so I may be totally wrong.