Hi, that's a nice composition for donuts :)

Some critical points that came to my mind:

- The texture is a bit thin at some points. Some quick arpeggio/scaleruns could be added for that or some more octaves/instruments and rhythmic emphasis in the backing.

- Drums sound somewhat plastic when they are at full power.

Very nice work, reminds me of the band Summoning!

Yep, can definitely see the Main Donut being introduced as an epic, troubled but ultimately sprinkly sweet fellow with a heart of chocolate.

I love the boisterous and hopeful atmosphere the piece has, it sounds like a great introductionary soundtrack for a game. Also reminds me a bit of Super Smash Brothers music; I think because of some of the melodic themes/rhythmic patterns, and because of the variation in thematic content.
Like Kasu said, the drums do sound a bit plasticky/out of place. Apart from that, perhaps more variation in the overall dynamics would help bring out the climactic bits somewhat more.

Thoroughly enjoying this! :D

This was a catchy tune btw. I noticed myself humming it a long time after listening it a few times :D

Did I hear a bit of choir right at 1:48? If so, I'd definitely like to hear more of that at the end and have it come out more. You could just have them singing "ahh" or whatever and it could keep going right to the end and would sound awesome I think. Great piece!