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Hi guys, I recently finished a short demo piece for a client. I would love some feedback on it! Mainly on the composition itself, rather than the quality of the production. The piece is in the style of Grant Kirkhope, the composer & sound designer that worked on N64 titles such as Banjo-Kazooie and Goldeneye.

 

https://soundcloud.com/jed-crouch/demo-banjo-kazooie

 

Thanks in advance :)

 

 

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The composition is really fun! Even with the sounds you have, I'd recommend creating more bass in your piece. It's lacking depth and bottom-end and if done right this can give the piece more impact while keeping it fun and light in the other areas.

 

Overall, musically, very fun and very appropriate! Nice job!

 

Nate


Also, I know it's just a short demo but there's lot of potential for chromatic movement and expansion of ideas which you could possibly do in a full version of this track.

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