Just created my first song! Would love to hear some critical feedback if not too busy!

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4 comments, last by Iced P 6 years, 10 months ago

Hey everyone, I'm new here to these forums and since my Rokits finally came in I decided to finish up my song.

I tried to make it kind of Megaman-esque (sort of fast paced and never slows down), would love to see what you think and see if I can improve in some areas.

https://soundcloud.com/isaiah-phillips-262485374/too-many

Hope you enjoy!

Just doing what I do.

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I just listented to it. Sounds pretty good. Sounds like something you would hear on NES or SNES. I like it.

Overall, I like it! There are some notes that feel a bit off in the counter (harmony) parts that I'd suggest taking another look at. And later when the melody is by itself there are some out notes. I'd also consider having the counter parts be different patches that the melody patch. The mix could use more low end.

Also it feels like most of the channels are center panned, so experiment with panning things around to create a deeper (as in space, not tone) mix. But for a first stab at composing, I'm pretty impressed! Keep it up!

Nathan Madsen
Nate (AT) MadsenStudios (DOT) Com
Composer-Sound Designer
Madsen Studios
Austin, TX

Thanks! I will definitly try some more mixing and see if I can get the panning down right. I will add some low end too :D

Just doing what I do.

So I have updated the song I made to orchestral instead of the synth, wanted to see which was better. More feedback is welcome!

https://soundcloud.com/isaiah-phillips-262485374/too-many-trumpets-revised-1

Just doing what I do.

So I have updated the song I made to orchestral instead of the synth, wanted to see which was better. More feedback is welcome!

https://soundcloud.com/isaiah-phillips-262485374/too-many-trumpets-revised-updated-6817

Just doing what I do.

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