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Another Game Concept Critique

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A while ago I posted a game concept and asked if the document was well-written and if the game seemed fun. I got some helpful responses. Now, I'm asking the same thing for another game. I'd also like to ask if it seems like a feasible game to create with a group of hobbyists. If people seem to like it, I may post it in Hobby Project Classifieds.

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ObDMAUWsndSAJ1EpQGRDxtR8Xl9xPotx89OZ0sgRaIw/edit?usp=sharing

 

Obviously, I'm no expert or I wouldn't be making this thread, but I think the combat seems simple enough, but the world and movement may present a problem.

 

Thanks for any advice you can provide.

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It looks like you've fleshed this out quite well. Simple yet potentially lots of fun. Only thing I would recommend changing is the 3x movement speed with sprinting. Either the base speed is too low or the sprint speed is too high. There shouldn't be that large a gap otherwise there's no reason not to sprint besides to take in the scenery, and if there's a cooldown on sprint it will make normal movement speed feel like a hassle. Obviously that's just my opinion, you know how it's going to play out better than I do.

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