Hey, Stretch! It''s good that you are writing, and thinking up ideas. In the future, you should probably place your writing ideas in the Game Writing forum. That''s probably the best place to get feedback on scripts and such.

Askadar, English is not your native language? I wouldn''t have guessed. You express yourself very well. In fact, you write in English more fluently than many Americans.


Jonathon

quote:"Mathematics are one of the fundamentaries of educationalizing our youths." -George W. Bush

"When a nation is filled with strife, then do patriots flourish." - Lao Tzu

Jonathon: Well, that''s maybe because I spent a year as an exchange student in New Mexico.

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Perhaps we could add a Calculus plot twist!

f(Y)''s friend is f(Z). However, f(Y) descovers that f ''(Z) (derivitive) is equal to f(X) + f ''(Y)! So they plot f ''(Z) on a graph and realize that f(Z) is infact f(D), their arch nemesis! BUT, they realize that f ''(D) has a limit x->0 so they can destroy him simply by dividing by x^2!

Hope that makes as little sense reading it, as it was writing it

unfortunately for our charaters dividing f(D) by x^2 sometimes caues f(D) to release a dreaded spell known as divide by zero, making f(Y) helpless because then f(D) is pulled into the undefined world. which can wreak havoc on the peaceful planet of math-land.

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Those who dance are considered insane by those who cannot hear the music.

But after consulting with the Old Nut in the Math Department, f(Y) is able to transport himself into the imaginary world by taking the even root of a negative number:

  sqrt (-X)^2  

After a frightening search, and traumatic adventures, f(Y) discovers the ultimate weapon - the hyperreals! The undefined chaos of f(D)''s unpredictable behavior is no match for Zeno''s paradox!

But the hyperreals are too much for f(y) to control, and reality itself begins to unravel. Before long, Elvis is storming the Bastille beside Tao, which flows over the battlefield like water. When Pasteur gets a craving for a lemon meringue pie, and orders Frodo to "just give it," things are so out of control that growth decides to kill all the sidewalks in Bavaria by melting emptiness with a fork. Sadly, the light at the end of the tunnel has been horribly depressed lately, and there seems to be no pickle in sight. Can this be resolved? Or is it too late?


Jonathon

quote:"Mathematics are one of the fundamentaries of educationalizing our youths." -George W. Bush

"When a nation is filled with strife, then do patriots flourish." - Lao Tzu

Hold on a sec... if this guy''s brother was killed, then why the hell is he looking for him? *sigh*

...go on and live with no regrets, you only have one life...