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You've seen AAA game design docs posted online and have learned how to design your game on paper. Now how about securing that funding? Learn again from the pros by seeing how they pitched their games!

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Irrational Games - Bioshock Pitch Document



Jul 19 2011 06:25 AM
"Make you own Weapons" - I don't remember that part. Would be interesting to know why some ideas are scrapped exactly.

I mean, I can understand - I'm happy with guns I pick up, crafting weapons sound more like work than fun - but I don't know.

Jul 19 2011 06:57 AM
Well it was possible to upgrade weapons... Maybe they initially wanted to let the player construct the weapons from scratch? That would be a little far fetched, i think...
Jul 19 2011 06:58 AM
Nice pitch, though. Very well written introduction...
Jul 19 2011 08:42 AM
The story itself, about being a deprogrammer and rescue an heiress sounds closer to what they are using in Bioshock: Inifinte.
Jul 19 2011 05:20 PM
Funny, the main character Carlos Cuello was the technical lead when I was working on the PS3 version.
Jul 20 2011 04:35 AM
I notice there're a few pie-in-the-sky features in this pitch that never made it into the final game. I'm interested to know, did they have a proof-of-concept prototype to go with this pitch, or were they able to get initial funding purely off their reputation and this document?
Jul 20 2011 01:52 PM
This is a great service to current and future game developers everywhere! I really enjoyed reading through this!
Jul 21 2011 08:17 PM
Hinch, I doubt there's ever been a game pitch that didn't promise the moon. Sometimes it's hyperbole, sometimes it's ideas that don't work with how the game evolves, sometimes it's just lying to get into a funder's pockets. In any case, you'd have to ask Ken Levine that question.
Jul 21 2011 09:13 PM
I love of idea of controlling the game world. If that made it into the full game that would of been awesome. Still bioshock was and still is an outstanding game.
/ Orymus
Jul 26 2011 11:32 AM
I feel like the weapon customization they've promised was perhaps too close to the Deus Ex franchise. Maybe it did not stand out enough to make it into production. Still, I'm curious how far along they went with that idea... alpha? beta? who knows...

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