I had created a book on Game design, programming, AI, marketing, etc... 300+ pages. I had originally intended to print this, but decided to release this for free.
I'm releasing this for free, but it will not be stagnant. I'm looking to improve it from other game designers. I'm working with some marketing people right now, and we are discussing a re-write in smaller sections. I would really love some feed back as to what you think of its design. I'm really looking for making the version 2 of this to be great. I've had over 2000 downloads so far, so I don't need any "You rock" responses. Though I'm not opposed . What I'm really in need of is real critiquing. even to my comic character approaches, the art work, anything.
I really want to know what you think is good, bad and ugly.