Hi,

I just finished this large scale orchestral piece and would appreciate to hear what you think of it.

It could be used during the final battle or set piece of a game or movie.

https://soundcloud.com/robertblaauboer/ruin-and-preservation

Thanks

The variety of textures is really nice and the inner parts add a sense of fullness to the sound. At the moment I can hear a lot of ideas but also a lot of repetition of that first basic idea. Instead of coming up with loads of things that fit with that first idea, I think you should try to develop that melody into something with more shape, The simplest thing you could do is move the motif up and down the scale to find a nice answering phrase. Then come back to it and start thinking about extra accompaniment parts. Also the ending needs something more satisfying, maybe a held low note from the bass trombones or something similar.

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I agree with you on the repetition. I might rework this piece a bit or use your feedback on next pieces.

That sounds awesome, would it be too much to ask what software you used to produce this?