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Your link is broken, but I figured out what it was trying to link to anyway.

I think the two pink ones are better than the black one, and out of those two, I liked the first one the best.

Andy

The first pink one is pretty good. I think a black one with the same font as the first pink one would also look pretty good.

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I like that top title with the larger 'K' on Kimori and larger 'Alpha' text. I wonder how it would look on a dark background.

I also like the first one best [smile]

I can see a common trend developing here ...

The middle pink is natural handwriting, but it has a bug, as well as the bottom one
You should not fall, but rise with your text otherwise you provoke subconsciously
a down with your brand. The uppermost is correct, but the letters are unnatural for
leisure handwriting style.
Good luck

Yep, i like the first one best too, although the 3rd one is interesting also.

Nice stuff all in all :)!

Thanks a lot for the feedback, guys! Looks like the first
one it is unless I get some other opinions from other sites.
Donald Duck, thanks for the in-depth analysis of the writing
style. Perhaps we will make the letters rise instead.

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Original post by Donald Duck The middle pink is natural handwriting, but it has a bug, as well as the bottom one You should not fall, but rise with your text otherwise you provoke subconsciously a down with your brand. The uppermost is correct, but the letters are unnatural for leisure handwriting style. Good luck

As a graphic designer and brand strategist, I have to disagree. The "rising" or "falling" of type is irrelevant in most cases.

Sherman: I like the first logo and the last logo, however, the first is more appropriate for a game while the last is more appropriate for... shampoo. In other words, the first is fun-looking, but the last is elegant--classy.

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Original post by Onikan Quote: Original post by Donald Duck The middle pink is natural handwriting, but it has a bug, as well as the bottom one You should not fall, but rise with your text otherwise you provoke subconsciously a down with your brand. The uppermost is correct, but the letters are unnatural for leisure handwriting style. Good luck As a graphic designer and brand strategist, I have to disagree. The "rising" or "falling" of type is irrelevant in most cases. Sherman: I like the first logo and the last logo, however, the first is more appropriate for a game while the last is more appropriate for... shampoo. In other words, the first is fun-looking, but the last is elegant--classy.

Quack! If you find one successfull brand whith the falling logo report it to the Belive it or not
coloumn in your local newspaper.

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Original post by Donald Duck Quote: Original post by Onikan Quote: Original post by Donald Duck The middle pink is natural handwriting, but it has a bug, as well as the bottom one You should not fall, but rise with your text otherwise you provoke subconsciously a down with your brand. The uppermost is correct, but the letters are unnatural for leisure handwriting style. Good luck As a graphic designer and brand strategist, I have to disagree. The "rising" or "falling" of type is irrelevant in most cases. Sherman: I like the first logo and the last logo, however, the first is more appropriate for a game while the last is more appropriate for... shampoo. In other words, the first is fun-looking, but the last is elegant--classy. Quack! If you find one successfull brand whith the falling logo report it to the Belive it or not coloumn in your local newspaper.

You're not using the term "brand" correctly. As a member of LogoLounge.com and as a researcher (who owns a successful strategic branding firm that has a "falling" logo), I can honestly say that you have not done your homework, or at least as much homework as I.

Thanks for your professional opinion, Onikan.
Anyway since the general consensus is on the first two logos,
we improved on them slightly. I am not even sure if
you guys can spot the differences but any feedback would be
great. Thanks! ^_^

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Haha I like the first one better too. The style is very.. very.. final.. very.. final fantasy-like :D

Are you sure you guys prefer the first one? Every other forum
I have posted the two new updated logos in seem to prefer the
second now. Thanks. ^_^

Hrm, go with the second logo. The first logo has some Photoshop effects which make the text look amateurish. Or show us a version of the first one without the gradient and outer glow. The first one will look much better if it acquires the same attributes as the second logo. The first one reminds me of Saga Frontier's logo.

The second logo has a distinct rythm which the first one is missing. The first one
has some unnatural, forced handwriting flavour, which is (don't take it as an insult)
a slight bit in the average junior designer's manner. Good your new second logo
has lost the malheureuse from left to right falling flow. Advice: The "K" shoul be
slightly lowered to give the whole logo a hint of rising (message to the user: Rising enterprise, rising sales and profit). Remember, the first thing that the end user sees is
the logo. You cannot be too carefull.

Onikan, LOL didn't you advise me to go with the first
logo before because the second logo is more suited for
shampoo?

So many conflicting opinions here. 0_o;

You always need to look at a logo once, then put it away for a week, and look at it again. I said go with the first logo because I was visualizing it with some attributes of the second logo's type. That was my first impression. I never liked the non-complementing colors of the gradient or the outer glow.

I think it depends on your game too. If it's more futuristic than fantasy, the second logo fits well. Vice versa.

I concur with Fritzcat's conclusion.