A much better video content wise, but it looks unprofessional due to the setting.

If you put the same enthusiasm into a new video with a solid background, such as a white wall, or an office bookshelf, it will look much better. Also, add some concept art, explain the pieces and give more of a description about what we are actually donating for. From this video, all we can discern is that Time Machine is a game, with the potential for 3D, (based on the need for a 3d artist), and that's as far as we can get. If you explain a bit about the game play then there will be a lot more information to base donations off.

What do you have done exactly?