Music Criticism

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12 comments, last by iosys 18 years, 7 months ago
Hi Kevin. Its better, much better. One more observation...Your saw wave may have way too much reverb on it. I think if you lessen the wetness of the reverb (Which is the lingering sound) by deadening it a little bit, the piece will have a lot more clarity and be more effective. Cool man. :)
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This is a really great start, nice sound, clear rhythm and motion, now all it needs is either a melody or a contrasting harmonic change. Give us some chord changes that make us yearn (not in a bad kind of way...lol) for the initial statement again.

its quite nice.
you have some nice ideas, you have to work a lot tho.
but im sure that with a reasonable amount of time you will do just fine :)
good luck :)
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The melodies are good and catchy for a main menu. However, the song is very raw sounding except for the vibraphone sound which I liked. There's a lot of room here, you can go with a better drum kit, maybe some live samples. That buzzy synth could be replaced with something smoother (it sounds like a default preset). Keep up the good melodies and work on improving the sound quality.
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